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Why Would You...? by NaterRang Why Would You...? by NaterRang
Awww...
Come on Applebloom and Scoot, you know that's not cool.

(Still working on the comic, hope you enjoy!)

Edit: Added Scootaloo's wings. XD
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:iconduplexfields:
Children are monsters. Annoying, selfish monsters. This could easily be a screenshot of an episode dealing with how people hurt each other, and how hard it is to get friends back after an offense.

Visually, this is a treat. The composition is simple, and elegantly leads the viewer from Sweetie Belle to the bag to the other two. The action lines on Apple Bloom and Scootaloo form a huddled A shape with the book. The backgrounds are clutter-free, and the circle on the floor symbolically isolates the two from Sweetie Belle.

The characters are well drawn, and on-model. The blush and the eye dilation on Sweetie Belle are perfect.

The book text required a click to zoom to read, but that's okay because it heightened the drama. The only things I think could use work are Sweetie's right hind leg and Scootaloo's left; the hooves on both are not quite on-model, IMO.

A stunning piece, which could easily be the cover to an MLP:FiM comic book.
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Vision: Oh, this is horrible. Also, sadly a common-place occurence. I can get behind the idea that neither of these imbeciles would understand what personal space is or why Sweetie Belle is angry.

Originality: In a television series, this would lead to a moral lesson about respecting privacy that the viewer gets but that the ponies don't. Here, it could be the jumping-off point for anything.

Technique: Aside from some minor quibbles with hindlegs, this is more or less what I would expect to see if I read about the scenario.

Impact: The immediate impact is Sweetie Belle being told not to take her privacy so seriously by invasive jerks who insist on not learning lessons. The more distant impact could be anything.
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TVnGames Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconapplejackmadplz:: Apple Bloom, you're grounded! No crusading, no playtime, and no supper!
:iconsadapplebloomplz:: I'm sorry, Applejack! It won't happen again! I promise
:iconmadrainbowdashplz:: As for you, kid, we're going to have a talk with your parents! You're going to get a lecture! That was totally UN-COOL!
:iconscootaloosadplz:: I didn't mean to, Rainbow! I'm sorry!
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:iconzonor98:
Apple bloom and scootaloo!! I will find you! And i willlll killl yhooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconjarkes:
...Did you ever follow up on this image?
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NaterRang Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I did not. Though there is a fanfiction in progress I stumbled across a few weeks ago.
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:iconjacob2223:
LOVE IT LOVE IT I READ THE FIMFICTION Story love it
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Allthestuffilike94 Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For some reason, your art always has one of two effects on me. Either laughter or heartbreak. This one is a heartbreaker.
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:icondrx-raven:
Dr. X: ..... The crimes of the past cannot be left unpunished...

Raven: Wasn't her and the girls getting revealed as Gabby Gums and neglected by the whole town enough?!
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Swordmaster200 Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please tell me this isn't the end of the Cutie Mark Crusaders!
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:iconunicornhorselover12:
my friends have done that to me before and my mom but that's mostly because I left it laying around and my sister found it and she got into trouble for reading it, yea she got into trouble. so I feel sweetie belle's pain, cute picture though I love the expressions
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