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Why Would You...? by NaterRang Why Would You...? by NaterRang
Awww...
Come on Applebloom and Scoot, you know that's not cool.

(Still working on the comic, hope you enjoy!)

Edit: Added Scootaloo's wings. XD
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Children are monsters. Annoying, selfish monsters. This could easily be a screenshot of an episode dealing with how people hurt each other, and how hard it is to get friends back after an offense.

Visually, this is a treat. The composition is simple, and elegantly leads the viewer from Sweetie Belle to the bag to the other two. The action lines on Apple Bloom and Scootaloo form a huddled A shape with the book. The backgrounds are clutter-free, and the circle on the floor symbolically isolates the two from Sweetie Belle.

The characters are well drawn, and on-model. The blush and the eye dilation on Sweetie Belle are perfect.

The book text required a click to zoom to read, but that's okay because it heightened the drama. The only things I think could use work are Sweetie's right hind leg and Scootaloo's left; the hooves on both are not quite on-model, IMO.

A stunning piece, which could easily be the cover to an MLP:FiM comic book.
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38 out of 43 deviants thought this was fair.

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Vision: Oh, this is horrible. Also, sadly a common-place occurence. I can get behind the idea that neither of these imbeciles would understand what personal space is or why Sweetie Belle is angry.

Originality: In a television series, this would lead to a moral lesson about respecting privacy that the viewer gets but that the ponies don't. Here, it could be the jumping-off point for anything.

Technique: Aside from some minor quibbles with hindlegs, this is more or less what I would expect to see if I read about the scenario.

Impact: The immediate impact is Sweetie Belle being told not to take her privacy so seriously by invasive jerks who insist on not learning lessons. The more distant impact could be anything.
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smashingbott Featured By Owner Edited May 3, 2015  New member Student Filmographer
ok maby yes my name is smores and i broke into s_b's house tied him up in the corner and is useing his computer now! DONT JUDGE ME!(i have no friends =()
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smashingbott Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  New member Student Filmographer
noo...
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derperpie Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  New member
like what is your name "smores" 
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derperpie Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  New member
what are you someone from there dimension?
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derperpie Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  New member
what u talk bout
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derperpie Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  New member
?
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smashingbott Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  New member Student Filmographer
derp
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smashingbott Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  New member Student Filmographer
wow soots  ab wow srlsy.... just, just wow
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smashingbott Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  New member Student Filmographer
im disapointed in ab, not scoots she always does this >=|
every single time... she also stole my clock like 7 times >={ 
every week....
like sense last year...
during a new year eve party.
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HappyTreeFriendsfics Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
SOMEONE MAKE THIS INTO A FUCKING COMIC KNOW
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dipsydew Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015
Sheesh, it's just a diary.
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SLB94 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
filled with all her deepest of feelings and thought's towards other ponies and herself, and how she's secretly in love with silverspoon.
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dipsydew Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
Well yeah, how else are you going to declare your love?

But no seriously, I was more commenting on the commenters vicariously murdering Apple Bloom and Scootaloo, and having their hearts broken. The picture itself wasn't too overly dramatic.

Plus with their reactions, it doesn't seem like what in the diary is too emotionally destroying. Those two wouldn't giggle if they were reading heartfelt love confessions, because though they might not understand the importance of privacy, they're still fundamentally good ponies. So their reaction makes it look like Sweetie is the one overreacting. Not that it's okay to read her diary, but they're probably reading things like "I said I ate two muffins yesterday but really I ate three" not things like "if I eliminate Apple Bloom before she suspects then nothing will stand in my way of locking Silver Spoon in my secret bondage dungeon." Sweetie is just taking it seriously because she doesn't know that it won't lead to dire consequences. Like Fluttershy, when she said "She might banish you from Equestria. Or throw you in a dungeon. Or banish you and then throw you in a dungeon in the place that she banishes you to!"

I mean, at least from personal experience, the worst anyone could have read from my diary was how I hated some bullies who pushed me around and told me I was shit. I'd be upset if the bullies read it, but otherwise it's pretty harmless stuff. Might even have gotten me help before it was too late, if someone had read it.
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HappyTreeFriendsfics Featured By Owner Edited Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
scootaloo and AB you son of a bitch 
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BronyOfEquestria142 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is downright CRUEL
Not even im that cruel gosh :o
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tawog11 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I WILL MURDER YOUR FACES!!!*BONK* Here you go Sweetie Bell
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BronyDefender Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
I heard there's a fanfic to this. I can't find it in the mountain of weetie fics :(
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BaconLover13 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
You should read New Discoveries
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BronyDefender Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
thx
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BronyDefender Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
*Sweetie
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TVnGames Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconapplejackmadplz:: Apple Bloom, you're grounded! No crusading, no playtime, and no supper!
:iconsadapplebloomplz:: I'm sorry, Applejack! It won't happen again! I promise
:iconmadrainbowdashplz:: As for you, kid, we're going to have a talk with your parents! You're going to get a lecture! That was totally UN-COOL!
:iconscootaloosadplz:: I didn't mean to, Rainbow! I'm sorry!
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MichaelGS-0148 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
...I don't think Scootaloo has parents.
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TVnGames Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If she doesn't had parents, then why does she have a room and a house? (Orphans not allowed to go outside the Orphanage, she has to live someone and that is, no doubt about it, her parents)
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MichaelGS-0148 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
I'm not sure I remember Scootaloo having a house or room or something. I'll be open to correction, though.
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BronyDefender Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Watch the episode 'Flight to the finish'.
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MichaelGS-0148 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Damnit, I forgot about that.
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BronyDefender Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
LOL 
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MichaelGS-0148 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
...what
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TVnGames Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Proof? And not because "they not on-screen"
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Zonor98 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Apple bloom and scootaloo!! I will find you! And i willlll killl yhooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jarkes Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
...Did you ever follow up on this image?
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NaterRang Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I did not. Though there is a fanfiction in progress I stumbled across a few weeks ago.
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jacob2223 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
LOVE IT LOVE IT I READ THE FIMFICTION Story love it
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BronyDefender Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
I can't find itWaaaah! 
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Allthestuffilike94 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For some reason, your art always has one of two effects on me. Either laughter or heartbreak. This one is a heartbreaker.
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
Dr. X: ..... The crimes of the past cannot be left unpunished...

Raven: Wasn't her and the girls getting revealed as Gabby Gums and neglected by the whole town enough?!
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Swordmaster200 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please tell me this isn't the end of the Cutie Mark Crusaders!
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HayleeRainbow Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
That's Mean! :noes:
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Unicornhorselover12 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
my friends have done that to me before and my mom but that's mostly because I left it laying around and my sister found it and she got into trouble for reading it, yea she got into trouble. so I feel sweetie belle's pain, cute picture though I love the expressions
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ChaudStarpower Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
how could they????? That is not......but.....that is cruelty towards the Adorabelle of cuteness <:(
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WithinSouls Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
NNOOOOOOOOO!!! 
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw... That's just too cute! Poor Sweetie Belle.
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DragonGod10 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, that is messed up.
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ninsennansen Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aww :')
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Jazzglenn421 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
SB's expression just hits the feels
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AJR001 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Poor Sweetie Belle... Oh Noes!
To AB and Scootaloo, not cool. No, just No, I disagree! .
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Applejack2011 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Favorited.
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