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Why Would You...? by NaterRang Why Would You...? by NaterRang
Come on Applebloom and Scoot, you know that's not cool.

(Still working on the comic, hope you enjoy!)

Edit: Added Scootaloo's wings. XD
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Children are monsters. Annoying, selfish monsters. This could easily be a screenshot of an episode dealing with how people hurt each other, and how hard it is to get friends back after an offense.

Visually, this is a treat. The composition is simple, and elegantly leads the viewer from Sweetie Belle to the bag to the other two. The action lines on Apple Bloom and Scootaloo form a huddled A shape with the book. The backgrounds are clutter-free, and the circle on the floor symbolically isolates the two from Sweetie Belle.

The characters are well drawn, and on-model. The blush and the eye dilation on Sweetie Belle are perfect.

The book text required a click to zoom to read, but that's okay because it heightened the drama. The only things I think could use work are Sweetie's right hind leg and Scootaloo's left; the hooves on both are not quite on-model, IMO.

A stunning piece, which could easily be the cover to an MLP:FiM comic book.
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The Artist thought this was FAIR
31 out of 35 deviants thought this was fair.

Vision: Oh, this is horrible. Also, sadly a common-place occurence. I can get behind the idea that neither of these imbeciles would understand what personal space is or why Sweetie Belle is angry.

Originality: In a television series, this would lead to a moral lesson about respecting privacy that the viewer gets but that the ponies don't. Here, it could be the jumping-off point for anything.

Technique: Aside from some minor quibbles with hindlegs, this is more or less what I would expect to see if I read about the scenario.

Impact: The immediate impact is Sweetie Belle being told not to take her privacy so seriously by invasive jerks who insist on not learning lessons. The more distant impact could be anything.
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HappyTreeFriendsfics Featured By Owner Edited Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
scootaloo and AB you son of a bitch 
BronyOfEquestria142 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is downright CRUEL
Not even im that cruel gosh :o
tawog11 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I WILL MURDER YOUR FACES!!!*BONK* Here you go Sweetie Bell
BronyDefender Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
I heard there's a fanfic to this. I can't find it in the mountain of weetie fics :(
BaconLover13 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
You should read New Discoveries
BronyDefender Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
BronyDefender Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
TVnGames Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconapplejackmadplz:: Apple Bloom, you're grounded! No crusading, no playtime, and no supper!
:iconsadapplebloomplz:: I'm sorry, Applejack! It won't happen again! I promise
:iconmadrainbowdashplz:: As for you, kid, we're going to have a talk with your parents! You're going to get a lecture! That was totally UN-COOL!
:iconscootaloosadplz:: I didn't mean to, Rainbow! I'm sorry!
MichaelGS-0148 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
...I don't think Scootaloo has parents.
TVnGames Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If she doesn't had parents, then why does she have a room and a house? (Orphans not allowed to go outside the Orphanage, she has to live someone and that is, no doubt about it, her parents)
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