god this is super just sad to sweetie bell.I would of done the same i ANY one would read my diary.It is personal...i put my dream in mine and they are just plain strange if any one read it i would be crying like mad too!
the scene is drawn very good!it is perfect!sweetie bell tail is that long or curly. the eyes are too pointer but i think her eye color would shrink too. the color is bloody brilliant off course!
but it is still mean that your reading her diary! Scootaloo and applebloom!Mabay sweetie bell should hide her diary i hide mine under my bed or someplace else good job!
Vision: you did an excellent job of getting the point across, and it was executed beautifully. Sweetie is my favorite of the CMC, so to Seeger betrayed like this really hits home for me.
Originality: I have honestly never seen something like this before, and it is kinda refreshing to see original things coming out of this fandom.
Technique: I had to ding you here because, for all of the impact, it is hampered a little bit by the art style. The lines just are a little too thin, and Sweetie's hind leg looks a little off. Other than that, you did a good job.
Impact: Like I said, this picture hit me like a ton of bricks. Just the thought that they would do that to her makes me want to reach in there, slap away Sweetie's diary, and give them a very stern talking to. And then give Sweetie a hug.
the scene is drawn very good!it is perfect!sweetie bell tail is that long or curly. the eyes are too pointer but i think her eye color would shrink too.
the color is bloody brilliant off course!
but it is still mean that your reading her diary! Scootaloo and applebloom!Mabay sweetie bell should hide her diary i hide mine under my bed or someplace else good job!
Vision: you did an excellent job of getting the point across, and it was executed beautifully. Sweetie is my favorite of the CMC, so to Seeger betrayed like this really hits home for me.
Originality: I have honestly never seen something like this before, and it is kinda refreshing to see original things coming out of this fandom.
Technique: I had to ding you here because, for all of the impact, it is hampered a little bit by the art style. The lines just are a little too thin, and Sweetie's hind leg looks a little off. Other than that, you did a good job.
Impact: Like I said, this picture hit me like a ton of bricks. Just the thought that they would do that to her makes me want to reach in there, slap away Sweetie's diary, and give them a very stern talking to. And then give Sweetie a hug.
Overall: Woo!
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