Very cute, definitely in touch with the characters real personalities. I would definitely recommend this to a friend, and I hope to see more like this in future. I especially liked the end panel. I have never been a fan of Scootabuse, so it really makes me happy to see Scootaloo getting the love that she so richly deserves. My only real critique is the fact that your art style seems a little rough around the edges. Not to say that it needs to be the freaking Mona Lisa, but taking a little more time to hone your skills definitely wouldn't hurt. Keep it up, and don't give up hope!
This comic is wonderful! While I liked the initial scenario because it was cute and made me laugh, but I also like the detail that was put into it. The ponies' ruffled manes, their facial expressions, their bright red noses, and even the shadowing was great. And the personalities fit the characters as well. I can definitely see Apple Bloom simply falling asleep on the couch, and Sweetie Belle being content with the situation. All those parts of the drawing really caught my eye, unlike some other drawings that I've seen. Overall I think this artwork is great, both visually and emotionally... especially since it made me giggle to myself. This artist has definitely earned himself a watcher.
Great little story. I mean makes you wonder how many times they have done stupid, dangerous stuff and had to be saved by someone (probably dash). So much Dawww! They are so cute. Even when they are all sniffly. Meets the special needs of the DashScootaloo fans. What is Sweetiebell looking at. Is she... and Applebloom... hmmm? Let that one be for now. Sweetiebell is so adorable with her cup of Cocoa.
The funny thing is... Dash an Scoots should be the most resistant to the cold, being pegasii and all... I mean, after all, they should be naturally resistant to the cold due to dealing with the weather and being in the upper atmosphere and all that And it's CUTE!!!