However, I'm getting off topic. Having Trixie become a better pony interested in making others happy, without intervention by anypony else, is a great thing to see. It may be a bit cheesy, but I like the way this went.
I'm not sure about Twilight Sparkle's actions, though. While I am guessing that this was meant to be comedy, her behavior is pretty much reversed from how she normally acts. I could see Applejack or Rainbow Dash doing this (as if they're ones to talk), but not Twilight.
As for the artwork itself, there's not really much to say. It's quite good, and while not quite the level of the show is still very impressive for one person's fanart. Trixie looks VERY weird, but I chalk that up to the fact that she's missing her signature cape and her "I am better than you and I know it" expression.
Overall it's a very nice comic, and I would be interested in a sequel. Keep up the good work!
but i think Twilight should think about her "friendship problem" 1 more time... (you know... letter to Celestia... tardy?)
STOP TALKING IN THE FIRST PERSON!
She may be a self righteous jerk, but she's our self righteous jerk.
We love you Trixie.