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Core of the Apple Part 2 by NaterRang Core of the Apple Part 2 by NaterRang
Part 1: [link]
Part 3: [link]

It's finally here! The next part of the Core of the Apple comic!

I'm too tired to write much right now. XP

I shortened the parts so that I will be able to get them out in a more timely manner.

Look for part three coming soon!
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Be sure to check out the Comic Dub, once again graciously provided by :iconobabscribbler: !

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:iconthastrangr:
This... I can't even begin with this comic. It was very heartfelt and brought a tear to my eye. The final panel was especially strong. I read Part I, and found it to be an interesting spin on the "Apple family orphan" fanon. As I had read many fics and seen many comics that deal with the issue, none have ever much gone into, or sometimes even acknowledge at all , poor Applebloom's feelings. In addition, the artwork is beautifully done, but still reflects the air of depression. This was quite a gem and I look forward to seeing more of this comic. Keep up the good work!
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caballero-nocturno Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
Great work :D!
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:iconaranrebus120:
Aranrebus120 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
Awww, Apple Bloom's crying for her mama. The poor baby filly, she looks so sad. Makes me want to pick up Apple Bloom from her cradle and comfort her in my arms.
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Evanescyan Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Though I certainly don't consider myself NEARLY skilled enough of an artist to give this a proper artistic critique, I will say that this is very, very touching. I'm no orphan - I was born and raised in a loving family and I couldn't imagine having that taken away. But a familial issue liek this runs really deep and the raw emotion in this is so heartfelt its just.... *presses fist to chest*

This is gorgeous on many levels.
I couldn't approve more.

Well done.

AIP§
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:icontunder2510:
Tunder2510 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Feel nothing? Applejack, that is not good thinking, sometimes you have to let it out... :/
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:iconunicorn-skydancer08:
unicorn-skydancer08 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
Like a sledgehammer to the heart.
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:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaw... the last panel is so sad... :(
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:iconkurusuorb:
KurusuOrb Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is bringing me to tears
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What? How do you force yourself to feel nothing? Razor blades? Painkillers? Alcohol? Does she have her own little pot farm?
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unicorn-skydancer08 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
She forces herself to not think about it, to not care, to not let her emotions get the better of her. Some real-live people are very good at hiding their true emotions; they don a pretty convincing mask.
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very true, but still, what she did was a bit different. 
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:iconunicorn-skydancer08:
unicorn-skydancer08 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Makes sense to me.
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What she did felt unrealistic to me. The whole "lashing out" (not quite seen on this episode) is quite abstract; I've never seen it done anywhere but in Hollywood movies. 
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:iconunicorn-skydancer08:
unicorn-skydancer08 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Oh well. :shrug:
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's just me though, I guess. Mileage may vary and all that. 
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:iconunicorn-skydancer08:
unicorn-skydancer08 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
This is still well done. It's almost made me cry, and I never cry at anything. Makes me feel kind of callous because I don't.
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kcsalyer23 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
poor applebloom...this comic is so great
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:iconcalilthegayprince:
CalilTheGayPrince Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So amazingggg.
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:iconninsennansen:
ninsennansen Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely :')
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HamtaroDramaClass Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
here is part 2 dubbed :D www.youtube.com/watch?v=L34fNf…
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:iconwait0wat:
Wait0wat Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
I've become so numb, I can't feel you there.
Become so tired, so much more aware. - numb - Linkin Park
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:iconeletricspark:
EletricSpark Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:thunder: Really Sad The feels! :sad: 
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:iconcupcakecrazy43:
CupcakeCrazy43 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:icontearsplz:
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:iconneonracoon:
NeonRacoon Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nothing, I repeat, NOTHING has been able to make me want to cry that I read. This comic, just, the comic, -cries- SO BEAUTIFUL! 
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:iconrobored:
RoboRed Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Daww...little Braeburn...
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:iconthe-greyhound:
The-Greyhound Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
You're killing here :( (Sad)
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:iconthe-greyhound:
The-Greyhound Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
*me
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:iconguyversnake:
GuyverSnake Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
You gave a great sense of intimacy in these frames.
Really effective.
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:iconhrostami:
hrostami Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
:iconmanlytearsplz: *sniff, sniff*
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:iconrandomponyzilla:
Randomponyzilla Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013   Interface Designer
I actually felt a tear inside <:'(
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:iconweirdnwild91:
weirdnwild91 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ugh, that last panel just pains me inside... >.<
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:iconenergythehedgehog:
Energythehedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
Let the bed sheet
Soak up my tears
And watch the only way out disappear
Don't tell me why
Kiss me goodbye
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:icontemplar127:
templar127 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
:iconcryforeverplz: Cry me a river!
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AquaDragonDavanin Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aaaaw
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:iconba-sh:
Ba-sh Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You've earned a watch! :D
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor little gal...
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:iconscarheart76:
Scarheart76 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm liking this story.
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:iconziggrrauglurr:
ziggrrauglurr Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Damn you with this ninja feels...
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:iconnaterrang:
NaterRang Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You ain't seen nothin' yet.
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:iconmickeymonster:
Mickeymonster Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
We demand a continuation of this! It's way too good to stop now! :'(

(Excellent work on this. :))
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:iconnaterrang:
NaterRang Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! ^^

Actually, I'm making rapid progress on part 3. I pretty much finished inking the character lineart last night. If all goes well I might have the next part out in a week. The next part is pretty heavy though... but things will lighten up eventually.
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:iconmickeymonster:
Mickeymonster Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Much welcome ^^

Awesome! 8D
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:iconnaterrang:
NaterRang Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's finally up! ^^

[link]
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:iconmickeymonster:
Mickeymonster Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
And it's beautiful! :'D THanks!
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:iconhawkfirecatt:
Hawkfirecatt Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
THIS CAN'T BE THE END!!!!
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:iconnaterrang:
NaterRang Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Patience my friend, patience.
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:iconhawkfirecatt:
Hawkfirecatt Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Alrighty. :)
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:iconsplatter789:
splatter789 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Them feels.
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:iconnaterrang:
NaterRang Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Unfortunately, we're only on the tip of the iceberg.
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:iconquinken:
quinken Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
... MUST... KNOW...HOW...IT...ENDS!
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:iconnaterrang:
NaterRang Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm... working... on... it... XD
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