Finally it's up!
This has been the culmination of a project months in the making! (Though it's also a project that should've been finished a months ago. )
As is mentioned in the title this is part 1 of a 2 part story.
-I hesitate to mention this but, for those offering critique I must make a clarification; This has been a project months in the making. I'm not asking you to hold back or pull punches, rather just be aware that my art has improved since I originally sketched this thing out. Please take a look at one or two of my other recent pictures before you tailor your advice based on this picture alone.
-Anyway hope you guys enjoy!
Be sure to check out the Comic Dub, once again provided by !
Okay so im gonna start of with the impact this picture has then i will go onto the drawings themselves
First i wanna say Aj and Ab are perfectly in character for example, Applebloom acts like a typical kid would; Thinking what she is upset about is stupid ect
and applejack is being the typical loving sister trying to stay strong but eventually her own feelings take over which is what i feel would actually happen if this where a real situation
Okay now the topic of the comic is a mature one that me and allot of people wish would actually happen- Mainly because it would make for a very mature lesson, also it would be better than her parents suddenly appearing in S3, so this is why fan-art is always a nice thing to see, Plus your comic is handling the situation in a great way almost like the show would.
okay on to the drawing, first of i wanna say your drawing skills are amazing! some of the poses you have accomplished are really hard ones and you have done them perfectly, Also your shading is very accurate
Overall this is an amazing comic and i can't wait for more
For me this kind of story is really important. The characters are... like us. They struggle like we do.
I really love that artists like you can use the MLP world to create experiences we can share and connect with.
I think this is one little filly that's in need of a Doctor and his blue box.
stormfire: you have no idea slate..........
you made me cry...
it was just so beautiful...
Best to edit in links to all existent pages as you publish them, or else change the link from "Part 2" to "Next". In either case, all pages should still contain a link to this first page.
I started crying....
I wish i could hug her!
I also lost an Aunt in 2012. Everyone in my family was sad, but I think her close family members like my mother, who was sisters with her were sad the most.
And the comic dubs ain't the same thing, they cut a lot of the panel and i prefer reading.
But still, thanks.
I feel so depressed now.
This made me cry for real... it's so sad...
Amazing job! You really get me the feels...