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Core of the Apple -Part 1 by NaterRang Core of the Apple -Part 1 by NaterRang
Part 2: [link]

Finally it's up!

This has been the culmination of a project months in the making! (Though it's also a project that should've been finished a months ago. ^^; )

As is mentioned in the title this is part 1 of a 2 part story.

-I hesitate to mention this but, for those offering critique I must make a clarification; This has been a project months in the making. I'm not asking you to hold back or pull punches, rather just be aware that my art has improved since I originally sketched this thing out. Please take a look at one or two of my other recent pictures before you tailor your advice based on this picture alone. ;)

-Anyway hope you guys enjoy! :iconapplejackplz:

Be sure to check out the Comic Dub, once again provided by :iconobabscribbler: !

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Okay so here goes a Critique :D

Okay so im gonna start of with the impact this picture has then i will go onto the drawings themselves

First i wanna say Aj and Ab are perfectly in character for example, Applebloom acts like a typical kid would; Thinking what she is upset about is stupid ect
and applejack is being the typical loving sister trying to stay strong but eventually her own feelings take over which is what i feel would actually happen if this where a real situation

Okay now the topic of the comic is a mature one that me and allot of people wish would actually happen- Mainly because it would make for a very mature lesson, also it would be better than her parents suddenly appearing in S3, so this is why fan-art is always a nice thing to see, Plus your comic is handling the situation in a great way almost like the show would.

okay on to the drawing, first of i wanna say your drawing skills are amazing! some of the poses you have accomplished are really hard ones and you have done them perfectly, Also your shading is very accurate :D

Overall this is an amazing comic and i can't wait for more :D
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Excellent work. While many bronies have discussed and done various pieces of artwork about the Apple family's lack of parents, this comic strip here did it extremely well, citing a very good episode for the topic (Family Appreciation Day,) and giving a legitimate reason as to why Applebloom might be upset. Having Applejack coming in to comfort her younger sister almost always works, and the dialogue felt very natural, flowing, and realistic, it seems like something a real child in that particular position might say. The art work was fairly simple, but in this case it worked. The background art being too complex might have actually subtracted from the impact of the dialogue and situation. The only real criticism I have with the art is that in the last panel, Applejack's legs kind of look like really long feet. Also, there's no real resolution, but you said this is 1/2, so I'm not going to criticize you on that because you obviously aren't finished. I also love Applejack's character enough, she appears more heartwarming than usual but isn't out of character from herself on the show. All and all, an amzing piece of work, and you sir/madam (sorry, it's a little hard to tell on the internet,) deserve an award.
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Never get the chance eh?

Hmmm...

I think this is one little filly that's in need of a Doctor and his blue box.
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stormstarofstormclan Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i would feel the same way......
stormfire: you have no idea slate..........
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Sarafina2012 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  New member
Sad Pony 
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BaconLover13 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
I-I am not crying! I'm sweating out of my eyes.
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Sarafina2012 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  New member
Of course you are...
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NyxTheFlyingKatFish Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
good job... *sniff*
you made me cry...
it was just so beautiful...
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BlueMoonlightHeart Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
I-i'm not crying! J-just got a dust in my eye...
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DracoDei Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
A technical recommendation:

Best to edit in links to all existent pages as you publish them, or else change the link from "Part 2" to "Next". In either case, all pages should still contain a link to this first page.
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PrincessMcHi Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
Then...
*sniff*
I started crying....
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homefanfic877 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Artist
the feels!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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